About the studio · Albertson, NY

we’ve read your homepage twice. here’s who’s holding the pencil.

I’m the one who answers the phone at 68 Evans Avenue. The studio is two of us: one drafts, the other reads the draft cold. We write website messaging, launch emails and case studies for software that has to explain money, risk or hours saved.

Fixed fees from $620, invoiced half at kickoff and half on delivery. Mon–Fri 9am–5:30pm, evenings by appointment.

A long oak table in the studio's front room, covered in printed drafts marked up in green pencil
Front room, 68 Evans AveProof sheet no. 2
01 / a note from the desk

why two names are on the door

A hand marking up a printed case study with a green pencil
Second readStet

I started writing for software companies from the inside. I sat in the launch meetings. I noticed the email was always written last, by whoever had twenty minutes left, and that the homepage headline was usually whatever survived a vote.

Margin note: the product was good every time. The sentence that explained it was the weakest part of the launch.

Fintech made it worse, and more interesting. Every promise on the page has a rule standing behind it, and I watched good lines die in review because nobody had said up front what each one claimed. The writer and the compliance reviewer were reading two different documents.

“A sentence that survives legal and still sounds like a person is the whole job.”The line over our long table

So we opened the studio with two surnames on the door and one rule about the work. One of us drafts. The other reads it cold, with no memory of the call, and marks every place a stranger would trip. That second read is where most of the good lines get found.

We write for B2B SaaS and fintech and nothing else. When something lands outside that, a consumer app or an ad campaign, we say so on the first call and point you to someone better suited. Our own sentences get sharper when we stay in one lane.

The studio is a front room on Evans Avenue with a table long enough to spread out a whole site. We bill a single fixed fee per project because I’d rather you send us the awkward Slack thread than wonder what it costs to ask.

— the desk at 68 evans avenue

02 / the house stylebook

six rules every draft gets marked against

These are taped to the wall above the table. If a line breaks one, it goes back. Each rule is shown below with the kind of change it makes. The example companies are invented.

  1. name the day, not the category

    Buyers don’t shop for “automation.” They shop for the afternoon they get back.

    BeforeStreamline your finance workflows.
    AfterClose the month before the 5th.
  2. one claim per sentence, one footnote per claim

    Compliance can answer a single marked claim in one pass. A sentence with three promises gets three rounds.

    BeforeFast, secure and fully compliant payments.
    AfterPayments settle the next business day.
  3. the customer’s words go first

    The best line on the page is often something a customer already said on a call. We keep their phrasing and trim our own.

    BeforeA unified platform for spend visibility.
    AfterSee where the money went without asking three people.
  4. cut the adjective a competitor could borrow

    Our test is simple: paste the sentence onto a rival’s site. If it still works there, it doesn’t describe you.

    BeforeSecure, scalable and seamless.
    AfterTwo people approve every payment over $5,000.
  5. a number only goes on the page if we can show where it came from

    No invented lift, no rounded-up claims. If the figure isn’t in your data, the line is written without it.

    BeforeTeams save countless hours.
    AfterYour approvers stop chasing receipts on Thursdays.
  6. the button says what happens next

    “Submit” tells a visitor nothing. We write the button last, after we know exactly what the click delivers.

    BeforeGet started today
    AfterSend me a sample invoice run
03 / the full-site calendar

twelve working days, laid out on the desk

This is the calendar for our largest job, the $1,490 full website. Smaller projects run the same rhythm in fewer days. Dashed days belong to you; white days are the ones to circle.

  1. Week one — we read, you talk
  2. MonDay 1

    Kickoff call

    An hour with you. We bring the questions; you bring the messy folder.

  3. TueDay 2

    We read

    Sales calls, the support inbox, the reviews your rivals’ customers left.

  4. WedDay 3

    Keep reading

    Your three nearest competitors’ pages, marked up in the margin.

  5. ThuDay 4

    First interview

    Twenty minutes with one of your customers, recorded and transcribed.

  6. FriDay 5

    Second interview

    Same questions, different customer. We compare the vocabulary.

  7. Week two — we write
  8. MonDay 6

    Hierarchy

    The messaging order and one-page voice guide land in your inbox.

  9. TueDay 7

    Home + product

    First drafts of the two pages that carry the whole argument.

  10. WedDay 8

    Three more pages

    Pricing, about and use-case. Claims get margin notes as we go.

  11. ThuDay 9

    Draft one lands

    All five pages, after the second reader’s cold pass.

  12. FriDay 10

    Your turn

    Mark it up. If your notes take longer, the calendar slides with you.

  13. Week three — we finish
  14. MonDay 11

    Round two

    We revise against your marks and send it back by end of day.

  15. TueDay 12

    Files land

    Final pages, voice guide and transcripts, ready for your designer.

The second half of the invoice goes out on day 12. The $620 teardown uses the same bones in miniature: a call, a read, and an annotated redline in your inbox in three working days.

04 / what it costs to work with us

start with a read, or hand us the whole site

Three of our eight packages, chosen because they show how the fees climb. Every price is fixed before we begin, and two rounds of edits are inside it. A third pass is $140.

  • Entry point

    messaging teardown

    A 90-minute call and an annotated redline of your homepage, with three alternate headlines you can test the same week.

    Redline in your inbox in 3 working days

    Fixed$620 book the teardown
  • Proof

    customer case study

    One customer, 900–1,200 words, opening on their calendar instead of your logo. We run the interview and clear the quotes with them.

    Ships in 7 working days

    Fixed$740 write the case study
  • The whole site

    full website messaging

    Five pages written as one argument, a one-page voice guide, and two customer interviews. This is the twelve-day calendar above.

    Ships in 12 working days

    Fixed$1,490 start the site rewrite

Launch sequences, onboarding drips, pricing pages and homepage rewrites run $795–$1,280 each.

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Come sit at the long table

visits are by appointment, so we’ve read your pages first

Bring your laptop and the page you hate most. We’ll clear the desk, put the kettle on and mark it up together. Prefer a call? We pick up during office hours and say so plainly if we’re the wrong studio for the job.

The studio
68 Evans Avenue
Albertson, NY 11507
(516) 754-3140

projects@barrowcliffwynn.com

Mon–Fri9am–5:30pm
Eveningsby appointment
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